Entry #6 TikTok ban
Lately there has been talk about how the government wants to remove a well known social media platform, their reason being because kids on the app have been passing away due to challenges on the app. The congress hasn't had one valid argument as to why this platform should be removed from the people, making it more obvious that they don't want us to be aware of the world. This platform not only has been the only resource that is honest and reliable but people all around the world have a voice when it comes to TikTok. The government and the media has been gaslighting their people through many social media platforms including our news outlets. The restrict act isn't just about banning TikTok, it devs deep giving the government special powers to create committees to decide for us what is and isn't okay to say online.
if we were more aware we would rebel and voice our own opinions. We as people have been programed to believe certain things, telling us half truths and its called deception, we are slaves to the system but are told that we live in a free country. This bill that could be passed is basically saying, if we don't follow their rules on what to not say they will punish whom ever to prison for 20 years. This will allow the government to monitor our activity on this app and making a back door for the gov to access our accounts. The U.S government always been about money and power of over people and when we have the ability to actually voice or do something about a situation they want to act as if our first amendment doesn't exist.
Entry #5 tailgate ad
The ad starts off with two men in separate cars following each other. One of the men is wearing a suit which I'm guessing is representing the insurance company and the other guy is a regular person. The men in front is so focus on how the men in the back is tailgating him, making his focus only on him and not the road. The purpose of this ad is to relate from it, everyone always focuses on the person behind when your eyes should be up on the road, anything can happen at anytime and by you not being focus you will be at fault. Dealing with the other person insurance and the physical problems you might've cost the person. according to the man in the suit, Allstae will be able to cover all the damages if you sign up with them, Brive the audience of how good the insurance company is.
They make this Ad funny with facial expressions and phrases in a way for the viewer to not take offense and know they will be in good hands if something were to happen. The whole message from this ad is so we can rely on Allstate for full coverage of any incidents and the different types of coverages it has to offer. The author wants you to think about the Mayhem situation just in case if it might happen to you.
Entry #4 Love Yourz
A life without family isn't a life at all. At times we as people get caught up in our own lives and forget about the ones that we live for. Relationships and friendships come and go but as family we learn to always stick together because we are all we have. There a song by a famous artist called love yourz talking about, you can have everything that you always wanted but its never gonna make you happy if you don't have the people that you love by your side, many find this song to be very touching because living in a world of materialistic things you tend to forget what is more valuable then money and when everything is gone you crave that happiness that you once had. Blood doesn't always nessarly mean family, those whom we call family are the ones that have always been by your side and stuck with you through everything and anything, we tend to take advanget of those who are good to us by thinking "they will never leave", we lose valuable people but to teach us a lesson helping us grow and when their gone they regret not spending time with them by building that bond that they once had.
We as humans are not perfect, we make errors all the time, some might not even be as close to their family members because of some mistakes in the past and in which our egos win. We as human always want to be right making us prideful when it comes to family situations. Nothing in this world is as important to me than my family, they always come first.
ENTRY #3 AN EUCALYPTUS AFTERNOON
On a very hot summer night coming home from a soccer game Brandon decided to take a cold shower after playing in the sun for almost the whole day. Brandon recently bought a eucalyptus plant because he wanted to know how it felt since everyone kept raving about how good it feels after you shower. After he placed his plant above his shower head and started to shower normally, the only thing he observed about the experience was the strong smell the plant had and how fresh it felt.
later on in his shower he felt as if he was in a twilight movie, sensed his body getting cold making his skin feel like a bath in the sun; ''Is this how Edward Cullen feels like?". It sends him a signal to his brain that interpret as a Stimulating blood flow at the surface of the skin, which gave him the tingling and cooling sensation.
Eucalyptus is more for the feel of the effect rather than the taste it produces, it has a very toxic compound that humans cannot have as food. The plant has a very strong sharp smell, some may describe it as if one was hiking along a airy stream inside a pine forest. Also it's a good way to relax the muscles especially coming back from a activity that involves a lot of movement.
Entry #2 Flower Business
Hello My name is Aylen Reyes I recently started a small business called CosasxAntiguita on instagram, were I make floral arrangements and decorate them how the customer desires. I wanted to start a side hustle in were I felt confident in since I always loved anything with arts and crafts. It's a great way to distract my mind from my personal life, making me focus on one thing only and perfecting it for someone else rather than me feeling pressure in my own life trying to have everything picture perfect. I've only made two bouquets so far but with that I felt very free expressing something I knew I would love.
In my page I have a slogan called "With love", which represents everything I do in my life, I do with love. I want to show my audience through my work how much this means to me. Putting in the dedication and bringing out a part of me that the customer can take for a loved one, making everything 'With Love'.
I want my customer to get a safer feel on where their money is going by expressing it through my work so they won't be disappointed.
Aylen--Your blog is looking pretty good so far. You have some interesting content and pretty good visual engagement. Keep it up. You are a bit brief in your development and analysis, and you want to make sure to not write purely personal entries like you have here in Entry #2. The topic is fine, but ask yourself, "Why would my reader care about this?" and then work to add elements that might make your personal business experiences important/significant/interesting to someone who does not know you. Keep working to make connections to your audience. Keep editing carefully as well.
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Your four new entries are somewhat good, Aylen. You have some good ideas for topics, and sometimes you are developing your content enough, but you also are brief at times. You need to write more to say more. Dig further into your ideas to create more significance for your audience. Visual engagement is pretty good. Also, please realize that each of these entry numbers should have it's own post. You have written all 4 in the same post. Make that change for the next GP. Keep editing carefully as well.
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